Kia ora. I am Charlie J from St Mary’s School. I really liked that how you added leopard spots around the edges and the lion it brings the slide to life. I learnt that I could try and make a story from a movie or a tv show/program. Maybe you could change the font of the words, also space out the sentences because when I was reading it, I had to keep going from the start so it was hard to keep track on where I was. Maybe you add more slides for each part you can add more story to it. Please visit my blog here
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Kia ora. I am Charlie J from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked that how you added leopard spots around the edges and the lion it brings the slide to life.
I learnt that I could try and make a story from a movie or a tv show/program.
Maybe you could change the font of the words, also space out the sentences because when I was reading it, I had to keep going from the start so it was hard to keep track on where I was. Maybe you add more slides for each part you can add more story to it.
Please visit my blog
here
Mā te wā
Charlie
thank you and I will
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